Death is not the answer or Freedom

[bird7795]

Im bird, im a phucken skiddie,
im known as a prophet.

We live in harsh times.
Times of needs and wants.
Their not all met.
Theirs those that hide them
those that oppress them.
But they got no choice.
What are they going to do
with pleads that have no one
to oblige to them. NO
one to comply for them.
No one the hear them.
They go on not a word said.
Hushed. Doing wut is expected.
Wut is "Right" of them.
Expect nuthing want everyhting.
U have to work for wut u want
u have to make urself be heard.
Dont just waste ur breath
on ppl that wont do schit.
OR u can give up
on wut u want and just die
help us control the phucken
overfed populous of Earth.

[Guitar_clock]

6/10

[Spaced Ape]

Life is a tax on unbearing times
Will the world be known for their loving hate crimes?
Or will the people consider themselves as void
Do we cost the same if we never make a noise?
There are feeling being passed on to us every day
But those feeling are forgotten once lovers pass away
Do we need this path as much as words need us
Or is lieng now the truth and the injustice, just?

Yah man, I suck too.

ps. Yay I made 6/10

[Abstrakt]

@Darky: Take the 2 "the"s out of the last line and I'll give it a 6/10.

[Guitar_clock]

Life is a tax on unbearing times
Will the world be known for their loving hate crimes?
Or will the people consider themselves as void
Do we cost the same if we never make a noise?
There are feeling being passed on to us every day
But those feeling are forgotten once lovers pass away
Do we need this path as much as words need us
Or is lieng now the truth and the injustice, just?

Yah man, I suck too.

ps. Yay I made 6/10

Yours has real stuff in it. Not just poetry gibberish

[bird7795]

I ten to rant on.
alot.

Everyone in their minds
sumwhere deep or maybe
its not deep for sum of us
but everyone is fucken conceted.
And ur probably thinking that is right
cus well no one is around to know
wut ur thinking wut ur feeling.
And if sumone is around ur probably
are like this is bull schit. Which
in that case if u think wut im typing is
bull schit keep on reading. As u know
we've have always being lied to and lied
on the transection of our lifes. Biggest
lies there is. God loves you. Santa Claus.
And You can do anything if u set ur mind to it.
Well now im going to try to Explain why these
are lies. Cus sum of you might be saying that those
arent lies u might think im full of schit. And theres
the others that try to see all this in sumone else's
perspective. One: "GOD LOVES YOU"
It all depends on wut god u believe in and
wut u considere to be god. But for the religious
ppl just read the phucken bible. Does that
look like he loves you. Ill just answer the question
no. Look at all the plagues hes brought the
storms the punishments even to those loyal to
him. If u think of a good argument agains that
tell me about it. And dont say he gave us life.
Two: Santa Claus
This wont be hard to denounce and for those
of you who still believe in that schit well keep on
believing. Imagination is the greatest gift there is.
HOw the fuck is santa claus going to deliver
gifts to all the good children in the world. It cant be done
even if he does try to take advantage of time differences.
And anyways i dont think there are any good kids
left. NOt one has not thought bad have stolen a cookie
or thrown a tantrum. Fuck i guess This santa claus
denouncing schit is a lil harder then it thought. well he
cant live for that long. So there try saying thats bull schit.
Three: You can do anything if u set ur mind to it.
Well u can try to do anything. But u will fail. U really
cant do schit. Its all luck. YOu might have as much heart
as you want but it wont do you any good if you got no connections
The world will slap you down. Believe as hard as you want who
cares how talented you are u cant do schit. You will never
be wut u want to be. Aim to fail. But u can always try
thats wut makes life enteresting.

[Spaced Ape]

You tend to not spell so great. A lot.

[bird7795]

Thats me.
Why follow
wut somone else
did. Follow ur own path.
In which case
i should prolly
come up with my own
language. But no one
will understand.

[Pain Is All That's Real]

Your writing is very annoying to read due to the lack of proper spelling and punctuation...

[rainboo]

Your writing is very annoying to read due to the lack of proper spelling and punctuation...

i agree

[Abstrakt]

He could post in white like everyone else too. I like his avatar, its from Mega Man X. Boy, thats a classic..

[Pain Is All That's Real]

What's wrong with posting in colors? Well, as long as it's all the same color and it's not too bright to read anyway.

[rainboo]

What's wrong with posting in colors? Well, as long as it's all the same color and it's not too bright to read anyway.

its kinda annoying

[Pain Is All That's Real]

What's wrong with posting in colors? Well, as long as it's all the same color and it's not too bright to read anyway.

its kinda annoying

Ok, well I never thought it was annoying, but I can see how others could.

[rainboo]

What's wrong with posting in colors? Well, as long as it's all the same color and it's not too bright to read anyway.

its kinda annoying

Ok, well I never thought it was annoying, but I can see how others could.

yep yep.. very good.. well i'm off to sleep gd nite

[Pain Is All That's Real]

What's wrong with posting in colors? Well, as long as it's all the same color and it's not too bright to read anyway.

its kinda annoying

Ok, well I never thought it was annoying, but I can see how others could.

yep yep.. very good.. well i'm off to sleep gd nite

Okays then. Night.

[bird7795]

Ppl have said that.
They say i should
work on that part
cus it makes them not
want to read. And colors
are annoying. Thats why
i use them. And the avatar
doesnt fit in in this forum.

[bird7795]

adn damm
two pages full of schit.

[Pain Is All That's Real]

Well I don't mind the colors that you are using, but obviously other people do. I on the other hand have seen people use colors in much more annoying ways. But don't use them just to piss people off.

[Abstrakt]

One more
thing, you
don't have
to make a
new line
every few
words like
this.

[Pain Is All That's Real]

Yeah, that's another thing that was bugging me. I knew I forgot something!

[Abstrakt]

I was referring to Bird7795.

[Pain Is All That's Real]

So was I.

[Abstrakt]

Oh, I see now, my bad.

[Pain Is All That's Real]

Tis ok.