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Postby dot. » Fri Sep 04, 2009 3:22 pm

Even out of love you inspire me

blow up the outside blow up the outside blow up the outside Man don't the stars look great tonight Didn't know the sun was up Guess we've been doing this for far too long blow up the outside blow up the outside Where is my mind? Man don't the sun look great today Didn't realize, never realized, Drowning now, Music drowning me out, pullin me in, flippin me around blow up the outside, blow up the outside Could it be that we're the outside? Gimme a kiss, don't laugh, It's real, It's love, It's love I promise, I swear, I'd never. . .Man, don't the stars look great tonight, it's dark but shit, I guess you know what comes next so skip the living, let's find our death to make sense, we wanna stare into the sun some more, and just stare, because sentences don't need punctuation, life needs only pauses, a simple rhythm of waves against a hanging head - I thought it was the music, but I'm really drowning now, metaphor starved I am, I'm really drowning now, Drowning out, gettin pulled in Love so cliche it feels like sin, But you loved me then, I've stared into the sky since then, Since him, won't you feed me another one of those stars from your eyes, because this one tastes too bitter - Perhaps your stars are not for me blow up the outside blow up the outside


. . .I wanna start writing again, but I've forgotten how. :(
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Postby Voly » Sat Sep 05, 2009 4:06 am

Writing is like showering, if you stop doing it, you begin to stink. :)
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Postby dickwad » Sat Sep 05, 2009 7:30 am

and like every other "talent" as well.

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Postby dot. » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:22 pm

I was just looking through my old posts, seeing how much I've changed, and I came to this page. I'm kinda amazed by my writing. I know it's not superb, but I have gained a little confidence over the years.

I'm gunna make myself write something, anything, once a day. I'm gunna post it here, cause I don't really want anyone I know reading it. I'm still really weird about that.

I'm sure most of it will be bad, because I haven't written anything in forever - Even the last thing I posted was from a few years back. I hope that some will be good though, perhaps even better than what I've already written.

OH! And there's a literary mag at my college. I'm thinking bout entering something in it. The ones posted here are the ones I think are my best, but there's alot more on DA.
www.girljacktheripper.deviantart.com

Now taking votes as to which one I should submit, if everyone were to be so kind.

(WILL SEND PICS OF BOOBS TO ALL THAT VOTE!)

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Postby Chichevache » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:45 pm

Whose boobs will be in the pics?
I can't decide which one of us will leave here alive
Your fingers breaking as I place them over mine
The only thing I need is time
To change your mind, I said

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Postby dot. » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:58 pm

Goddamn you and your reading between the lines.

Well, unless asked, I wasn't gunna send any pics. But if anyone prodded me about sending pics of minbe, I was gunna send pics of a huge naked woman.

Please help me out, anyways?

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Postby dot. » Wed Jun 30, 2010 1:52 pm

This sucks, but I'm out of practice. Bite me.


I guess it's really not your fault
I've never felt good enough
Bullshit in the past, it's beaten me
It's really not your fault
I won't let you keep some things to yourself
There's secrets everyone must keep
You're with all these other ones
But only in your mind
For that I should be grateful
Love keeps you with me
I just can't help feeling paled
Though I should know you aren't comparing

I should know it's not my fault
I try so hard to be everything
I am only one, and there's many others in this world
It's really not my fault
Why dream of me when I'm already next to you at night
I just wish you'd think of me when I'm away
If you're ever with another one
I'm sure it would only be if I left
But I won't let this beat me
I don't want to change you in the least
You know how lucky I feel
I just can't help feeling down
I've got one hand in my pocket

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Postby Voly » Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:05 pm

Dot. wrote:I'm gunna make myself write something, anything, once a day. I'm gunna post it here,


Haha. Zero. That's how many times you did this.
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Postby dot. » Wed Jun 30, 2010 5:14 pm

*whacks with a hammer*
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Postby Zyn » Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:02 am

I write daily. Course, its easy for me, as I have a book that needs transcribing. I write approx a chapter a day, usually between 10 and 15 Word Document pages.
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