My stuff......

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My stuff......

Postby Rusty Nails » Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:35 pm

There are so many things I can say I hate about you.
Then again when I think about it:
I can't say I don't want to see you
Cause I love it when my heart skips with a glance.

I can't say I don't want to hear you
Cause your voice sooths my erratic heart.
I can't say I don't want your touch
Cause it seems to be the only thing holding me together.

I can't your not worth my tears
Cause those tears make me feel alive.
I can't say I want you out of my head
Cause you seem to always find a way in.

I can't say I want you gone
Cause my heart aches when your not near.
But mostly I can't say i don't love you
Cause everything inside me and about you screams that I do.

So I give you my heart which seems to already belong to you.
Just let me burn, it's what I deserve, God I've lied, am I lost in your eyes....

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Postby krishh. » Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:34 am

LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLROFLLLLMAOOOOOAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAOMGOLMAOOLOLOLOLOLMGOMGROFLLLLOLOLOLOLOLLLLOLOLOLOLOLLLL


that is all.
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Postby ƒrosty » Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:47 am

Try again.

Wait... no don't.

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Re: My stuff......

Postby Astica » Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:52 am

Rusty Nails wrote:There are so many things I can say I hate about you.

Ten things?
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Postby Ay-Ze » Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:56 am

Sorry, Rusty.
A synonym is a word you use when you can't spell the word you first thought of.

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Postby Rusty Nails » Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:12 pm

Thank You Thank You
Just let me burn, it's what I deserve, God I've lied, am I lost in your eyes....

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Postby obskewer » Fri Nov 06, 2009 12:35 am

I can't... I can't... I can't...

Write poetry?

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Re: My stuff......

Postby Zyn » Fri Nov 06, 2009 12:51 am

Rusty Nails wrote:I can't your not worth my tears


I can't your poem.
S. [Burned] Y. wrote:Zyn, please stop telling the special ed kids of your school about this place.


Voly wrote:You just earned back all the many, many points I've taken away from you (mentally) since you've been here.

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Postby HartKat » Fri Nov 06, 2009 4:47 am

Its okay I guess.
WAIT!, were working with some really unstable herbs!

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Postby Rusty Nails » Fri Nov 06, 2009 3:03 pm

And i say again thank you thank you
Just let me burn, it's what I deserve, God I've lied, am I lost in your eyes....

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Postby pink_lemonade » Sat Nov 21, 2009 2:30 am

I don't see what is so funny. Somebody has put their feelings? into verse, and I think that's beautiful.
Repetitive; but the regularity contrasts nicely with the strong emotion trying to be demonstrated. :)

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Postby ƒrosty » Sat Nov 21, 2009 4:10 am

The reason you don't see what's so funny is because you haven't finished puberty.

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Postby krishh. » Sat Nov 21, 2009 5:00 am

neither have i, hobo.
Voly wrote:You just got told by a sassy 13 year old.

dickwad wrote:i'll let krishh off because i wanna fill her hoo-ha with my goof juice.

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Postby HartKat » Sat Nov 21, 2009 6:18 am

Or I.
WAIT!, were working with some really unstable herbs!

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Postby ƒrosty » Sat Nov 21, 2009 8:32 am

krishh wrote:neither have i, hobo.

Hobo? What? Haaa
HartKat wrote:Or I.

Well you don't get it either. :lol:

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Postby geroge » Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:06 am

i wish my name was pink lemonade. :(

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Postby ƒrosty » Sun Nov 22, 2009 4:41 am

Just capitalize it and it can be yours.

(I think you cool as is, brah.)

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Postby Zyn » Mon Nov 23, 2009 12:12 am

Still in puberty, and I get it, Frosty...
S. [Burned] Y. wrote:Zyn, please stop telling the special ed kids of your school about this place.


Voly wrote:You just earned back all the many, many points I've taken away from you (mentally) since you've been here.

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Postby pink_lemonade » Mon Nov 23, 2009 12:19 am

I don't think the stage at which my development is, matters. Maybe in a couple of years i'll get to be in on the joke or something. But until then, i will continue to appreciate people's work if i feel it deserves.

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Postby Astica » Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:47 am

Frosty wrote:The reason you don't see what's so funny is because you haven't finished puberty.

This actually made me laugh in real life, vocally. Although the escape of sound in my laughter may have come from my sitting position >.>

Welcome, pink lemonade.

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Postby pink_lemonade » Tue Nov 24, 2009 12:53 am

Thankyou :)

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Postby dickwad » Tue Nov 24, 2009 4:33 am

Astica wrote:
Frosty wrote:The reason you don't see what's so funny is because you haven't finished puberty.

This actually made me laugh in real life, vocally. Although the escape of sound in my laughter may have come from my sitting position >.>


what, are you sitting on a dildo or something?

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Postby dot. » Tue Nov 24, 2009 2:55 pm

XD


I just noticed something - We have a new member that knows (mostly) how to punctuate, capatalize, and use grammar correctly.

Hurray!
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Postby pink_lemonade » Fri Nov 27, 2009 12:41 pm

What can I say, I like to punctuate. Ahem


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