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Dumping for C&C (will return the favour)

Postby Guitar_clock » Thu Feb 24, 2011 9:59 pm

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Postby HeRetiK » Thu Feb 24, 2011 10:54 pm

I think it looks nice, however it looks a little flat, so I'd try a little shading (e.g. dark gradient towards the border). However that's what I would do, so it's not necessarily the fitting thing for you.

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Postby Elen Sila » Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:41 am

Once again, GC demonstrates his mad art skills.

It's almost like you have artism, har har.
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Postby Guitar_clock » Tue Mar 01, 2011 5:53 am

It was a project for school (derp!) so I couldnt add anything that wasnt scanned in from nature.

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Postby Voly » Tue Mar 01, 2011 8:21 am

Neat!
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Postby Guitar_clock » Fri Apr 22, 2011 5:28 am

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Postby HeRetiK » Fri Apr 22, 2011 8:12 am

The game situation gave me a chuckle. Flask and the lighter are a really nice touch.

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Postby Zyn » Fri Apr 22, 2011 2:43 pm

I like the fade in focus the farther back you go. But you should use magic and make the focal point a little bit farther along, IMO.

I'm no photographer, though, so I don't know if I used the proper terminology or if that's even possible without ruining the picture. So whatever's cool witcha.
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Postby Guitar_clock » Tue Jul 19, 2011 11:50 pm

Any C&C appreciated



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Postby HeRetiK » Wed Jul 20, 2011 10:01 am

Good composition and lovely depth of field on where it applies.

What bothers me a bit are the cut off windows / air vents (?) at the top and bottom of 03.

Also 04 seems overexposed, especially the shopping center at the back, but I would assume it's on purpose (especially the contrast in exposure of the house in the front and the shopping center at the back)

Also the cropping at the top of 11 bothers me slightly (i feel like it should have been either more or less cropped, but not the way it is right now) however I quite love the colors and texture. Interesting shot.

01 shows that you have a good eye for color composition, also nice timing on 06.

Just wondering, what shot is 08 of? Seems like a plant or some kind of textile.


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