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My Poem

Postby Spaced Ape » Sun May 04, 2003 3:59 am

PRISONERS
Look down, look down
Don't look 'em in the eye
Look down, look down,
You're here until you die

CONVICT ONE
The sun is strong
It's hot as hell below

PRISONER
Look down, look down,
There's twenty years to go

CONVICT TWO
I've done no wrong!
Sweet Jesus, hear my prayer!

PRISONERS
Look down look down,
Sweet Jesus doesn't care

CONVICT THREE
I know she'll wait,
I know that she'll be true!

PRISONERS
Look down, look down,
They've all forgotten you

CONVICT FOUR
When I get free ya won't see me
Here for dust!

PRISONERS
Look down, look down
Don't look 'em in the eye

CONVICT FIVE
How long, oh Lord
Before you let me die?

PRISONERS
Look down, look down,
You'll always be a slave
Look down, look down,
You're standing in your grave



How you like it?
Is there a promised land
Or am I on the journey going to nowhere?
Are the streets paved with gold
Or am I slipping on the mold that slowly grows there?
DevilDriver - Monsters of the Deep

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Postby HeckBilly » Sun May 04, 2003 7:21 am

Eh, that sucked, wasent even cool
Just kiddin', April Fool!


but serious, awesome poem.

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Postby -ab-stract-ion-ism- » Sun May 04, 2003 8:10 am

dude that poem waz kickass,people like you are the kind of people i was hoping to get help from
They can never lock our mind up, and at thy sundown we can escape,escape in our dreams

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Postby HeRetiK » Sun May 04, 2003 8:47 am

good one! :)

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Postby Spaced Ape » Sun May 04, 2003 5:32 pm

Thank you very much....
Is there a promised land

Or am I on the journey going to nowhere?

Are the streets paved with gold

Or am I slipping on the mold that slowly grows there?

DevilDriver - Monsters of the Deep

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Postby -ab-stract-ion-ism- » Tue May 06, 2003 5:36 pm

gee thanks darlire i guess if you wrote that you just automatically gave me permission to use it on my site and giveya credit:)
They can never lock our mind up, and at thy sundown we can escape,escape in our dreams

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Postby dickwad » Fri May 09, 2003 9:16 pm

HillBilly wrote:Just kiddin', April Fool!


dude, your like a month late!

btw that was a cool poem i really liked it!

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Postby croovman » Sat May 10, 2003 11:14 am

that poem brought tears to my eyes.

poor prisoners.
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Postby HeckBilly » Sat May 10, 2003 3:52 pm

dude666 wrote:
HillBilly wrote:Just kiddin', April Fool!


dude, your like a month late!

btw that was a cool poem i really liked it!


no stupid, you're a month to early.

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Postby -ab-stract-ion-ism- » Sun May 11, 2003 4:55 am

darklire im using your poem on my site
They can never lock our mind up, and at thy sundown we can escape,escape in our dreams

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Postby Spaced Ape » Thu May 15, 2003 12:46 pm

go ahead, just gimme credit
Is there a promised land

Or am I on the journey going to nowhere?

Are the streets paved with gold

Or am I slipping on the mold that slowly grows there?

DevilDriver - Monsters of the Deep

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Postby Nightmare » Sat May 17, 2003 9:07 pm

Wow, pretty good :)
You love this sig
and you know it

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Postby Mikaeli » Sat Jun 28, 2003 4:56 am

Very good poem. Need I say more?
I like the stars…it’s the illusion of permanence...I can pretend that lives last longer than moments...

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Postby Spaced Ape » Sat Jun 28, 2003 8:08 am

Im a shithead, so sue me
Is there a promised land

Or am I on the journey going to nowhere?

Are the streets paved with gold

Or am I slipping on the mold that slowly grows there?

DevilDriver - Monsters of the Deep

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Postby Mikaeli » Sat Jun 28, 2003 3:02 pm

Your not a ...sh!t head. And I dont feel like sueing anybody. :)
I like the stars…it’s the illusion of permanence...I can pretend that lives last longer than moments...

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Postby Syn » Sat Jun 28, 2003 5:13 pm

Sounds as if it came from a song...
But meh, *shrugs* I liked it.
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Postby Mikaeli » Sat Jun 28, 2003 5:14 pm

Yes, it's very good. Hey Syn, when are you going too send in another one of your poems? I really like them. :)
I like the stars…it’s the illusion of permanence...I can pretend that lives last longer than moments...

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Postby Syn » Sat Jun 28, 2003 5:20 pm

Mesh, That's a simple humor one. =\ Hmm
Lemme check around this pc. I'm sure I've got some lingering around from the past. My most recent, 'Ode to the Fat Man' is on the other Pc tho... heh it was a quick away msg for AIM more so than anything.
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Postby Mikaeli » Sat Jun 28, 2003 5:22 pm

I'm looking forward too it! :)
I like the stars…it’s the illusion of permanence...I can pretend that lives last longer than moments...

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Postby Mikaeli » Sat Jun 28, 2003 5:23 pm

Sorry about the Double Post. :(
I like the stars…it’s the illusion of permanence...I can pretend that lives last longer than moments...

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Postby Spaced Ape » Sat Jun 28, 2003 8:58 pm

is ur avatar an actual pic of you?
Is there a promised land

Or am I on the journey going to nowhere?

Are the streets paved with gold

Or am I slipping on the mold that slowly grows there?

DevilDriver - Monsters of the Deep

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Postby dickwad » Sat Jun 28, 2003 9:14 pm

Darklire wrote:is ur avatar an actual pic of you?


hmm is yours?

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Postby Mikaeli » Sat Jun 28, 2003 10:31 pm

Darklire wrote:is ur avatar an actual pic of you?


Yes. It's the only picture of myself that I had on my Computer at the moment. I dont really look to good do I? :(
I like the stars…it’s the illusion of permanence...I can pretend that lives last longer than moments...

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Postby Syn » Sun Jun 29, 2003 3:42 am

Heh heh heh
Ah, Women.... Well, as little as it is... covering up most detail... heh
I'd say you look well.

XD Not much of a compliment, I know. But I really can't judge by a thumbail.
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Postby Mikaeli » Sun Jun 29, 2003 4:10 am

I can send in a Larger Version of it....
I like the stars…it’s the illusion of permanence...I can pretend that lives last longer than moments...


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