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poems

Postby krishh. » Fri Nov 08, 2013 3:17 am

so i've always written poems and little passages of prose, but only recently have i decided to share it as a form of therapy and communication.
they're super depressing and you'll probably roll your eyes but i've already forgiven myself for being a teenager

i'm no wordsworth; i do this for fun, but constructive criticism is welcome

ps i'm at a really shitty point in my life right now, growing up lolol

so here's my poetry blog
do read through at least three, please, they're all quite different as i'm still experimenting. endure, shiver, emesis and always are my personal favorites.


forgive the title, it even makes me cringe until you realize it's hella clever
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Postby Guitar_clock » Mon Nov 25, 2013 5:58 am

2.68 uses of "I" per 1 poem = 51 "I" uses per 19 poems

Move on with yourself!

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Postby Guitar_clock » Thu Dec 12, 2013 6:48 am

Well, team¿

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Postby ƒrosty » Mon Dec 16, 2013 11:55 pm

Nothing wrong with being totally self absorbed. It's worked for me so far.
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